Comments of Protagonist x Rival

Full version: Shoujo Protagonist x Rival-san

omg the constant misunderstandings were so frustrating and the translation was sometimes poor BUT OMFG THEIR RELATIONSHIP AT THE END.... I TEARED UP THEY'RE SO CUTE...

7.5/10 Nice plot line, pretty repetitive, but cute. There were a few problems though, bad translation towards the end, and a couple of chapters were uploaded more than once. It was still a nice gl, even though I did get bored a couple of times.

Last read: V2 chap 10

ch 4
the 25 short chaps all essentially had the same punchline which became very monotonous and annoying quickly imo. it also quite frankly felt like being trapped in dream and trying to run and not actually moving with how the plot itself seemed to never progress. i only read 4 of the longer chaps so i admittedly did not experience the whole story but it essentially kept having the same punchline etc which at that point i already got sick off… i def liked those 4 chaps more than the shorter ones prior but i was put off enough already that i dont rly feel like continuing… the characters feel so,,, plastic i dont rly feel attached

V2 ch 16->
Noooo what happened to the translations?!?!
I don't even know what's going on anymore

THIS CZNT BE IT

Freakin precious angel babies. Love Hiyama and Kimura with everything in me.

AWAWWAWAWAWAWWAW LOVE IT

grrr they're so fucking cute

What a good GL I wish the translations for the last few chapters didn’t suck booty tho