Comments of Pure Princess, Bartered Bride

i thought i was going to die of the cringe

For me it's another Harlequin, how I wish another ending, more interesting where they can't necessarily ended up together.

I rather liked this one, because while it's nice to see the man run after his misunderstood wife and make up with her in the end, there is something to be said for a woman who won't give up on her man. It takes strength to recognize that it's a relationship you don't want to let go and that you are going to work for it even if the other partner isn't all on board at the moment. Kudos to the FL!

Its not the best…. but its good. I see why it’s a one shot though