There’s something vital about them falling in love with each other that’s missing. I don’t know what it is, but the pacing was way too fast and while the romance is cute afterwards, I don’t know why they fell in love with each other at first beyond having sex.
yep! this shit is going in the fucking hall of fame! fucking great! magnificent! fucking awesome! anyone who hates on this shit is gonna get the fucking hiroshima reannactment on their own house! NIYAMA IS SO ME!!!!!
liked it as a pwp! i mean they both said they love each other but as a romanticist, i felt like it was more of lust than really love! but that's just accdg to my standards, and accdg to our mc and ml they are in love so i enjoyed the smut scenes nevertheless