The art was really nice, and overall it was short and sweet. the smut was okay, I feel like it didn't flow as much as I would've liked, just in terms of them doing the do felt choppy and didn't flow as much as it could have
eh the story was a bit lacking in my opinion but other than that no complaints lol. i also wanna say that i hope people dont think ALL yaoi readers are like the person in the top comment honestly i hate the top comment so much its so weird and makes the comment writer seem like a fetishizer of BL which is gross fetishizing real gay relationships is awful but yeah not all yaoi readers are like that