Comments of Shousetsu Ka to Koi Asobi Karada kara Hajimerutte Ari Desuka

Mizuki has a bad breakup and the handsome Takuma finds her crying in the rain. He takes her home, comforts her, and they sleep together, after which they end up becoming friends with benefits. Mizuki finally realizes she wants more at the same time she figures out Takuma is in love with someone he can't have, so his heart seems truly out of reach. Takuma is dang smooth. Fun enough read with good consent.
Trigger warnings: cheating (mentioned), incest themes (stepparent attraction).

This is really cute and I absolutely love it. BUT..... It's fast pace and incomplete. It's 3 stories that feel like they were crammed together cause someone decided they didn't deserve their own individual stories. I personally would liked to have seen more of a detailed Story 1 (The Novelist and College Girl) and Story 3 (Co-workers)
If anyone wants to know just how fast-paced these chapters are, Spoiler description below.
Chapter 1: Going from Friends With Benefits to Relationship
Chapter 2: Jealousy and gets Engaged
New Story
Chapter 3: They get together
New Story
Chapter 4[END]: They get together? It's not clear. It's implied that maybe she moves in but it cuts off before we know what happens. It literally ends after they finish having sex.
My Notes:
Story 1 (Ch 1&2) Novelist and College Girl
Story 2 (Ch 3) Roommates (Friend-BestFriends Little Brother)
Story 3 (Ch 4) Co-workers

The plot is nonexistent WHY THE FUCK WAS THERE SO MYCH IN ONE CH IT
FELT LIKE 6 CHS PASSED WTF

pw much p, ch 4

story is too fast n why r they always crying

TO RE-READ (4 CHAPTERS)

Short 4 chapters

7/11/2021 ☆ 5/10

Wow! The first and last guy was pretty sexy looking.

This manga is not the best but it’s good i can deny that. Its a wonderful story.

Complete ch 5
I don’t want to tag these even if I was okay with them.

I liked all the three stories! Smut is ok and the art is so nice too

too fast paced. couldn't feel things

It's a sexy manga and I didn't like the ch.3 history. It's so so, but I like it the others. I recommend it ;)

All of the stories were sweet and there was no rape!!!!!! It's kind of sad that rape is expected in these