its not bad but i agree with others in the pacing, we dont get enough context for things that happen nor background on the mc. at this point ill just read it to finish it. lawl.
Clunky in art, story and translations. Feels more like a first draft than a finished product. Everything is rushed in a way that ruins any possibility of excitement for the next panel. Half the time the time I'm not even sure what I'm supposed to be looking at- as if panels are missing.
Story throws us into what happened to MC in a very unimpactful way. Feels akin to reading a children's book, where they avoid giving as much detail as possible- with no plans to ever share it with us the reader. It's hard to feel any real motivation from MC. He barely looks upset, he easily earns the money for a new machine, he quickly gets into the game, he magically finds a man who grants him special powers... all within the first 2 chapters. It's simply jarring the way its thrown together.
