Comments of Thank You for Your Betrayal

I’m rating this a 4. Just because They started a marriage contract. I HATEEEE WITH A PASSION CONTRACTUAL MARRIAGES

Now I feel bad cus I really liked it, I know it was kind of crinière but it was refreshing to see a story like this (for me)

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This started out really good and I liked how cheeky the ml was BUT THEN EVERYONE ELSE GOT SO DUMB WTF like why’d you leave someone who could potentially be a spy so freely like that effs

Set them all on fire and watch em burn Queen.

8/10 for me. Despite being a typical plot the story telling has potential. But often I feel the focus is placed on wrong things. Like I feel this one has too many filler chps. Things are happens, but things that actually matter talk quite sometime to happen. So I found myself scrolling through waiting for something IMP to take place.

The art is beautiful though so it helps to keep moving forward!

What irks me the most is that the MCs often take the most logical step. For eg. when the FL is "saved" the most logical thing would be to discuss her goals and plans to do whats next with the ML i.e. the contract agreement for marriage. But they instead focus on some other things. At times I feel that certain things are "forced" into the story, coz if the MCs talk abt those things, the story will be reaching it end soon.

Over all it has been a good read for me! Engaging enough work!

Stopped at chapter 14… it’s kind of boring!

The story is moving fast, but it could be good.

its written weirdly? some of the panels dont make much sense so its hard to track whats happening

ch 16 2-11-24

45, she’s going to give them all a run for their money

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Nice art and stiory
Art is so medieval