I didn't even read this cause the rating ummm only reason i wrote this comment is because of the title i mean- THAT BOY IS A MONSTER MOMOMOMONSTER THAT BOY IS MONSTER MOMOMOMONSTER! HE ATE MY HEART!
I'm going to leave one comment here: I read 2 chapters of this and I will not proceed with it. The art is not bad, there's room for improvement as with any artist. But I'm going to nitpick here on the story. There was way too much information being dropped in the second chapter by the main character. There is a rule in writing and it's applied to anything with a story: show, don't tell. You can take full advantage to unveil the story a bit by having him interact with other characters or his environment to show what's going on. It could also give us glimpse into his personality. This is not me telling you that you should quit or stop, but rather constructive feedback. Please take this into consideration as you continue
