I enjoyed the concept but I just wished there were more on the side story 'cause I felt it lacking. I also agree to this comment "This story was a bit of an enigma. Good at times but weird at others. A few details didn't quite line up well, but it was an interesting concept. This might not be one I'd recommend to a friend, but it was an interesting read."
98 oct 23 I finished this story out of pure curiosity sa ending. Ang daming plot holes, and andaming fault sa character ESPECIALLY sa MC. Yung romance din nila, kulang sa pagtetemper. The over all plot of the story was nice pero kinulang sa pagbibuild up. Hays. Ang ganda siguro nito kung mas maayos ang pagkakanarrate.
Idk some chapters were not that interesting and I just scrolled through it. And I feel like it’s abruptly ended after the sword fight with Iris, it’s anti-climactic imo. FL and ML deserve each other because the way they think is similarly annoying
It is a very beautiful and lovely story. The way Rose treated Apple at the beginning was kinda horible =)) but in the END everything turned out perfect except for that blonde girl.. IRIS? Idk but man she was sick. !!!Crazy!!!
ml is so rude, gets adopted, takes the invitation & makes apple casted aside! He does treats her better eventually but how could he. I got so mad at rose i wanted to crush her under my feet not knowing its the prince. Apple is quite energetic & she even went through to being a maid to her 'adopted' sister, like why even suggest that what. More chapters in & it starts to get more enjoyable.
January 30, 2024