I've always disliked the stereotype that you have to have straight hair to look pretty. Like ghurlie had beautiful hair??? And like the guy said, it matched it personality. Other than that, it was fairly wholesome
Re-Read. Definitely re-read. I like it. I like the drawing. Drawings are good. Story was cute and short. It made me smile while reading this. The story is so similar to my first love too but mines didn't end well. But that was my fault. At the time i didnt know/understand what i was feeling. I didn't tell my friends or family or ask for help or advice. I thought I was becoming weird so I didn't want anyone to find out. How she felt, describe how I felt too back then but instead of being brave like her, I ranaway from it. Just like in the story we were close but he started noticing other girl too. I hid my feelings but the jealousy I felt I didn't like it so I unconsciously started avoiding him. I didn't know, but we had mutual feelings for each other at that time too but I found this out yrs later when I moved schools. Really liked the story tho. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3