Comments of The Hunter's one night

WHY DO IT IN THE GODDAMN DUNGEON DUDE, AT LEAST GET A BED FOR FUCKS SAKE.

Toooooo short but danggggggggg its hot

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Ending was too abrupt

this was some straight ASS. nevermind all the fucking rape but also this is supposed to be a hunter's scenario... what the fuck is the point of developing as a hunter when all they used was some guns and knives? ? ? if that was the case then any fucking civilian could be considered a hunter.

This ended quite disappointing. I normally really like these type of short stories and this one also had a lot of potential but wtf is this ending. Where is the communication? There really was no need of integrating the rape parts. And then what? 3 chapters long? In a short story? For real?
At least tell yourselves that you missed each other... If only the last 3 chapters were different, it would have been a good read.

not very good

Unfinished story

That was some nice art but plot twist was just..

Wish it was longer AND NO FORCING THEY COULD HAVE MADE THIS SO CUTE YET THEY DECIDED TO ADD THAT SH IT

Wow...really cool..

uhmmmm good art but like.... uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

That's the end!???

IT ENDED J7ST LIKE THAT??? NO CLOSURE??? NOT EVEN A SWEET FLUFFLY SNIPPET OF THEIR LIFE TOGETHER TFF SHOULD'VE BEEN SO MUCH LONGER UGHH

Ais that it? hoping for side stories if that was the end huhu, i need more of themm

Really enjoyed the story but it’s hard to explain. By chapter 11 or 12 it goes haywire and then it’s just non stop smut between the two male leads. There was a really good build up and I would have loved more story or at least give it a proper conclusion