74 | Updates: Irregular 3 MC | 4 Conflict | 3 Execution [|||] At the brink of death, ML makes a wish to go back in time but even godly powers have limits and all that gets sent back are fragments that his past self receives as prophetic dreams. While this does lead to him changing his life, sometimes he has to wonder if it's enough?
I was wondering where did people get this kind of story ideas. About a game where it can turn your life upside down, it'll cost you, your life and ofcourse there is someone watching over you.
Omniscient Reader Viewpoint also got a similar jiz as this one, then I remembered. Its fucking Squid game, yall got it from there, so now I understand.
alright
Art 9/10, would be 10/10 if the artist wasn't obviously a male with some weird ahh fantasy, why do you keep drawing girls really weirdly, who tf leans forward and arch their back checking their phone.
Storytelling 7/10, u suck, I get it, easier to show then explain later, but u took too long before explaining, I'm confused for so long.
Story 8/10, pretty basic atp, but not bad, its good.
Characters 5/10, you fail at making me like anyone else but the mc.
Arcs? Idk the before paradise arc was good 8/10, but now as soon as he hit paradise, its boring, its just like any other mmorpg manhwas out there 6/10 bweh.
I'm on s2 rn, one thing I notice is how different they treat the different genders. It's OK ig, I'll still read it. It's just a bit annoying noticing how sexualized most of them are. Like one of the girls from s1 always stood in these weird poses that would definitely break someone's back irl. Also why did his character design change? I feel like the transition or ending in s1 was so sudden.
I remember dropping this once but I came back to it now. I like it, so I hope it continues to be good and less sexualized
Warning: possibly dropped!!! Seinen / Action / Adventure / Fantasy / Supernatural / Webtoons / Harem, reborn, based on a novel, magic, fantasy, isekai, another world, strong male lead, Adventure, action, reincarnation, horny men?, game