frankly the story wasnt very interesting, it felt like things just sort of happened with no real overarching plot. i wasnt particularly invested in the romance either or any of the characters. even for <40 chaps it felt like it dragged on. idk it was just very mid
Story felt like a frayed rope being held together at each end. A lot of things happen, like they jump from case to case with very little explanation. 90% of the story is just close-ups on people's faces so it's really hard to get a bearing on where anyone is. Theres a scene where they're rescuing some kid from a building and they have to jump from one balcony to the other... and it never shows us the balcony or the characters mid air. Really weird.
The drama was repetitive. One of them will say "don't get hurt'" and then get hurt. Every. Single. Time. Like, it's cute that they care about each other but man, it's so predictable, it's boring. The emotional drama of Miro liking Ian keeps getting interrupted and we also know Ian likes him bc this is a BL so of course he does. There's no question about it and it's not set up well enough so by the confession I was like who cares just get over with.
4/10. It's not bad, just not good and I got irritated reading it
It was a good read I guess. Something to cleanse my mind. Although the plot was sometimes all over the place that it's kinda hard to understand sometimes. Another reason why 4 stars only is because I wanted more of the boss lmao
Nice read, although the panels felt clumsy and odd at times, it took me out of the story bc the sequence of events didn't feel right, it's sad bc the story had a lot of potential yet ended up lacking. The ending was really nice though.
