Comments of Unraveled Cherry

eh i wish the uke was taller, now he just looks like a weird childlike creature

6 because the smut is not bad

already read with other story

assertive uke, hope it gets a longer version.

Funny hot and cute

TW: rape (just because you’re dating someone doesn’t mean they agree to everything specially while they’re sleeping!!)

bahahahhahaha seme is too rigid but good boy <3

It's adorable!
They are childhood friend become lover
The seme set a bunch of rules which basically left the uke with a blue balls until the uke seduce him and they eventually having sex
The seme remember littlest thing the uke said when they are little and he want to fulfill it

dating already and SO CUTE

4.5 just cause it's a one shot but I really like them together and there dynamic and it was a really fun story read

This was insanely stupid. Glad they'ee crazy for eo, cause if I was in that situation I'd leave, I'd at least want some hugs and kisses yk.

IT'S CUTE THO????

Your dads so fine man I also wanna marry him (literally only saw one drawing of him)
Also, WHY U ASKING HIM TO DATE AND THEN COCKBLOCKING HIM WHEN HE WANTS TO HAVE SEX WITH U MAN, AND TO TOP IT OFF U TELL HIM TO WAIT TWO WHOLE YEARS WITHOUT EVEN A SAD PECK CAUSE U WANT TO BE COOL AND U DON'T TELL HIM ALL THAT WHY??????
Again, this is a sexplot so it being about sex was obvious but come on, could have been better; the sex scenes were spot on tho