Comments of Vampire Beru and Ghost Aki

Before I get into my critique mind, I'll just say that I like the story, its beautiful. I adore the main characters. The ending is actually ending for season 1. last release on 2021. the author mention they'll continue it, but not now. I've seen this happening MANY times, specifically manhua. ending the story on season, and take undisclosed amount of hiatus on the series, which has potential for being discontinue. I said many bc I've seen other good manhua like this too, it end on season 1 and then there's no more update for years. theres one that I've been waiting for 5 years..-cries-
anyway, the story is good. HOWEVER, its not perfect. there are two things that could be improved. first, the first arc where they met the prince and the knight. its almost feel sudden, not almost, its very sudden. there's no built up, to introduce the tree has been for how many years, no sense of curiousity. we jump right into introducing the "prince" character. author should have spend more time on that. my initial reaction when this happen is "what? this feels so sudden". 2nd and last critique, moment between beru and aki. their closeness, bonding moment. its not shown enough. like i mean it. after the prince arc, they get close, sure. but its like leaving reader in the dark. we want to see wholesome moment, seeing more reaction from aki (as we alr know he fall deep in love toward beru) so seeing more "slice of life" moment for their bonding is much needed, before they went to the mine saving beru. I guess in short, its moving too fast. the plot is already good, but it need more "rest" time before moving to other arc. i hope it make sense?
so yeah, its a good manhua but need improvement. though i doubt anyone care about this.

so lovely like marshmallow huhuhu i dont think it’s resolved yet tho huhuhu

Straight up sobbing I love this so much I can't even explain the feeling of reading something this cute

Art ia fucking amazing, looks great! Ch /70

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Shounen Ai / Adventure / Fantasy / Romance / Webtoons

CH. 70
Finding this feels like destiny. A story full of lessons and heartache with love and loss.

О хехе, там есть и русское название

It was so beautiful… I’m crying

This was beautiful

Oh my goodness this was a happy ending plus sad I wish the author would have made the ghost revive by going back in time to save him and still end up with the vampire T^T I'm NOT CRYING OKAY! damn it the story is beautiful but bitter sweet for me

ch. 70

i dont think this is finish yet

S2 36 Cuteee.. should continue