Comments of When is the end

oneshot? wtf why tf..... bro what happened the plot was going good but its executed so horribly including teh trasnalation

This is sooo good, i need other chapters,

it's fine...kinda short and doesn't have that much explanations, but it's fine

A super quick read about two cute school boys who decided to start dating. We later find out that one of the boys are from a family of assassins.

Could be a lot more

Not interesting
-needs more development
-If it was made to be one shot and with psychologicals problems you can't just add that ending lol like it doesn't make sense first all the plot of the story was leading to a healthy relationship and than you add the part of a job? Which you clearly didn't explain which one which left us with details and at the end you just show a panel of a person the guy crying? And the other guy killing persons ? It was way out of context lol and you should have tried maybe put it at least some hints at the start and yeah that all.

Its like the plot thickens every second like i kinda thought that he had a secret relationship with the teacher and then it was his FATHER DUNDUNDUN, ( i also thought they were having a ,,,, relationship. I DUNNO THEY WERE SUSPICIOUS TT) then BAM he was a HAHAHAHHAHA murderer that was so random I CANT

How did it went from talking abt dick size to killing people HGAH


I honestly am okay with this

It was a great FLUFF story in the beginning but why did author suddenly dropped i kill ppl bcs that's just what my family do in the end...bad ending dude if author had continued to develop it, it would have been better.

ngl the yamete girl cracked me up

Wtf did I just read ?!

holee fucc???????y?????

I mean you can go somewhere with it HOWEVER this oneshot is straightforward (which is a good thing), but too rushed for my tastes. 5/10 If this has more story, it’d probably be 7-8/10. I don’t feel this should’ve been a oneshot seen as there’s no much you can do with it but yeah

Terribly drawn and the "plot" sounds like a parody.

"u smell sweet karuro san lets have sex im so hard rn" lmao boi calm yo ballsack down. its a oneshot but it all feels like it happened in 4 pages only lol