Comments of Yami Bl

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

First story is cute

Those three stars are all for the last story

Ch3/8Ch (some missing)

Crazy type of smut

Chap 10
1- (TW: suicide) Nice and short, not bad. Kinda sad.
2- Confusing. The structure of it was weird. Hard to understand.
3- Weird but story is better understood than story #2.
4- Loved that ending!
5- …. No chapter? Skipped?
6- For something without words this wasn’t terrible.
7- Hard to understand when characters look similar to each other and you can’t differentiate between them. That aside, not bad.
8- Once again, no chapter??
9- Borderline sad. Not bad.
10 - This one was a ride! Anyone know any other ones that are like this? I also read Haradas work, so any recommendations along those lines would be appreciated as well!!
-08/02/2023

wellllll very wellll

3 was horrendous 9 was sad :( INC
1 was TWISTED NICE…fcked a dead body?!
10 was good too ig

Holy shit some of these are dark asf

CRIMINAL SIDE EYE... BOMBASTIC SIDE EYE....

the last fucking story some are good some are ehhh but all of them - super fucked up suffered and enjoyed reading this

I read the first one a REALLY long time ago and have been looking for it for months. Even though stuff like this rips me apart, I just couldn't forget it. The rest of them were meh, but maybe I've been desensitized lol. The last one pissed me off, my heart aches for the sensei. If you liked that one, maybe Kokoro o Korosu Houhou (How to Break a Heart) would be up your alley - that's some f***ed up shit that enraged me the way this story did. The story is somewhat similar.

Rather than these being love stories, I would say they're depictions of how scary the mind can be when it tries to resolve trauma. They're a good example of how stories don't always depict what's "truth" or how things "should" be, but how a character perceives their experiences using their humanly flawed perceptions.

Anyway, good read if you're into dark, twisted stories without a happy ending.

The first story though

Some good some awful

Thats fucked up... still amazing tho- the incest was okay and the death was just unexpected cause the brother killed his brother and my high self thought the brother was killed or sum but good plot twist tho♡

just a bunch of weird stuff. most of them are toxic. i still can't comprehend ch 4. Wtf