Comments of Young Master

Completed ch 76

Haven’t read yet

Got very boring at around chapter 40

this was so mid. the plot had potential but it was executed poorly. very rushed. i get the feeling the author just wanted to write porn and couldnt be bothered to do the rest of the story lmao. the last 10 or so chapters got it especially bad. also blondie??? what was the point of him raping kyle? it was so unnecessary. then he goes off and noncons evan. its disappointing he wasn’t killed off, and instead got forgiven. gross

Aw man it's finished. I wasn't a fan of the whole... RAAAAH. I'm just (kanye stare) now.

C76 end, plot not well paced , rape by third party, won't reread,

Rushed ending!!!

5.3.24:

The characters look kind of weird, and the artist so stiff. Even the story is so cheesy. I feel like a 12-year-old came up with the story.

mannnn its kinda good?

it gets repetitive and i don't really like the artstyle

Character designs are very unique

Non of these character in this story is not toxic =)))) . Goul, thieve, violent man, raper, drug seller, killer, ...damn =)))

red guy reminds me of that one kpop member. I think dxmon?

64 def gonna read a soon as I finish reading rise for rubble
64 fuckkkk no I wanted to see Evan’s reaction after being a bottom tho ;-; bro was sick of holding and wanted to be held I didn’t see this development coming till Evan Roche tripped and Walter caught him. Yes yes make him fall in love so he’ll change to be a better man~ everyone loves happily ever after. But I also rlly want to see what happens next w the main couple after Kyle saw Adrian eating raw meat. Kyle is ready to accept it all lowkey. I also didn’t see the development coming that Adrian was a ghoul, not human. I thought he had powers, but not this. Lowkey I’d be fine as long as he doesn’t kill anyone innocent