Beginning was a bit slow and smutty (not complaining though) but was the storyline picked up after while which I was not expecting. Wish there could be Evan and Walter story and scene where Kyle got marked by Adrian. Overall a good read!
this was so mid. the plot had potential but it was executed poorly. very rushed. i get the feeling the author just wanted to write porn and couldnt be bothered to do the rest of the story lmao. the last 10 or so chapters got it especially bad. also blondie??? what was the point of him raping kyle? it was so unnecessary. then he goes off and noncons evan. its disappointing he wasn’t killed off, and instead got forgiven. gross
