Half the time I couldn’t tell who was talking. It was really confusing to read. Then to top it off, no one has sex in this. There is just a lot of confusing conversation. Good thing it’s only a one shot, because even as is, it’s a waste of time to read.
hahaha ... This was amazingly goofy. A 13-14 yo boy wants his "1st" time to be with a total stranger/man, instead of with the 27 yo woman he supposedly loves ? REEEEEALLY ????? No sex, just sermon. MEH ...
A overstretched and teetering vignette which feels as though the mangaka was working through personal discomfort with certain themes, primarily age disparities between sex partners, one underaged, and straight boys experimenting with gay sex. The set-up of an averted gang-rape, however, is all out-of-proportion as a plot-device means of establishing an adolescent's attraction toward his saviour, compared to the hints of male prostitution which merit barely the bat of an eye. The former wipes out all semblance of realism, but the latter depends on it. The resolution is all mature tenderness, self-awareness and concern, quite the about-switch compared to the initial casualness of the encounter which involves infidelity from both. Is the adult self-aware, or not? Partially, I guess. Is it realistic, or not? Elements of it are, enough to provoke some thinky-thoughts—not particularly profound ones, although better than most yaoi, and certainly enough to reveal that the mangaka shows promise. The art is beautiful. I liked it and would like to see the author do more work, but with the guidance of a very good editor who understands realism and can urge her to discard the more excessive stretches.
┑(￣Д ￣)┍ telling you the truth.... do not read this even tho the ending was kinda..... sweet, cute, adorable to some readers. But after reading this story you will feel unsatisfied TRUST ME ... its kinda waste of time >_> to that is....
It had a good story line but it just ended so suddenly and that wasnt a good ending. If there was more story and build up of characters then it would be better. But as it is a one shot I know it's a different concept but moments were to souless to me.
