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Pierce_55

BLaddict25

massage. short, complete, smut comedy

NanayoBlack

chlorine

. . . Meh. I didn't really like this. It wasn't offensively bad but it certainly wasn't good. The plot was strung together by a thread, the art was rather inconsistent—the bodies were good, but the faces could be pretty rough at times—the translation was pretty poor, and the seme was just a massive cunt. The only thing that was enjoyable to me was the porn, but even that felt too short to be enjoyed properly.

It's a shame because the base premise is something I think could make for a good story, it's something really cute. Eunjo visits a massage therapist at the referral of a friend, and asks for the strongest massage to get his money worth, since it's pretty expensive. He gets a massage from Inhwan, and as it goes on, Eunjo can't help but moan. He finishes the massage with a boner, which he's unable to hide away from Inhwan's sight. But as Eunjo goes to leave, Inhwan gives him his personal business card. Sometime later, Eunjo gives him a text, and Inhwan invites him to his house. As you could guess, when Eunjo arrives, Inhwan comes onto him and the two have sex. When Eunjo learns that Inhwan only planned for it to be a one-night stand, Eunjo makes it his mission to at the very least be sexual partners with him, not wanting to leave what they have to just one night.

I think that's cute. I think the little chase arc this story has, the almost pathetically desperate way Eunjo clings to him, is actually pretty sweet. He's a very typical "himbo," and I always love that archetype. But because of a mix of how short the story is and how poor the translation is, the short chase arc feels very stilted and, well, like not much of a chase. Eunjo just whines a bit, and Inhwan ends up rolling over because of it and giving him what he wants. Which isn't a dynamic I dislike, but you can feel that that's not the intention, so it's just lacking in any type of weight or impact.

Inhwan is just a massive dick, too. There's one moment where he makes what seemed to be a snide comment about Eunjo's weight, and there's another moment that left a sour taste in my mouth where he seems to hate the way Eunjo wants him so much—the issue I have is the fact that he's a grown man. If he doesn't like it, he can say that. He can draw that line. But he doesn't. I'm not sure if maybe it's a translation issue, especially as his actions don't really match his words. But if that's intentional, I hate that.

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