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Good concept with poor execution. 20 chapters in and I have no reason to be interested in any of the characters. Their line of "internal dialogue" feels like a cheap cop out, especially since they change their mind at a moments notice. It feels like so much is missing that I can bother to continue with the story. There is nothing compelling happening since I have no reason to be interested in any of the characters. The entire thing feels extremely choppy. I get the feeling they tried to pack 10 chapters into 2 in order to keep it "exciting" which winds up with lacking context and jumpy transitions.
For example we go from seeing characters in an air ship to encountering them on the ground, 0 explanation where this huge ship went. They encounter him in a clearing then are deep in a forest... which they are desperate to get out of? The enemies have like 2k surrounding them like it's nothing... yet later they are surprised to hear about modern fighting forces having 50k. :/ Like, they sent 2k casually for 3 people... I don't think 50k is that bigga leap. XD
+2 stars because he’s handsome
Ch.12 - WHAT THE FVCK IS WRONG WITH THAT GIRL??!!! SO ANNOYING FOR NO REASON!!
FVCK THAT I'M DROPPING THIS SHIT
Booooooring af, so bland that it's not suit my taste
2022-07-24 16:38
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HOPING FOR NO HAREM NO ANNOYING CHARAS IN FUTURE THEY ALWAYS RUINS A GOOD STORY
edit - read this if you are bore ..Mc just got isekai to another world & now he is participating in battle in hope for returning back to earth ..mc is a decent & sensible guy ..but story is not that engaging for me ..ok read
.... Just want to be a first
