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Story had so much potential, if only it had gotten fleshed out so much more, but instead it made no real sense. Firstly, why the fuck would a ruthless mafia boss make a wimp of a coward with no backbone his next successor? Apparently because he was guilty of killing his family ... like bffr lol
Then the lieutenant randomly falls in love with this wimp when his whole ordeal is taking advantage of people for his own gain?? Where did that shit suddenly come from? Where was the build-up? There was so little of it that it basically came out of nowhere.
The only character that made proper sense was the villain. He was actually consistent all throughout the story. The only female character was also okay.
Let's not even talk about how rushed chapter 10 was (and backwards). I just gave up trying to understand it. Like the lieutenant and the wimp ran away together, leaving everything behind so they can live a lovey dovey life??? ... bitch what happened to the scheming lieutenant who only cared about his own benefits?
didnt read this properly ngl
That was pretty intense, took years to finally completed the update
A corrupt police officer x gay figurehead mafia druglord
It was one of the best yaoi story Ive ever read, the seme is the kind of the scummy trope and the uke is the hopelessly fell in love with him but they are so perfect together, the author is so good in making the characterization and the art is somehow make them look hot
Whoa plot is actually really good, sadly couldn't find raws :'( last chapter was super mixed up but I think I hot the jist of it
The ending is not understandaable at all wtf. The plot is rush i regret everything
I'M LOOKING FORWARD TFOR RHE NEXT CHAPSS PlzlzZñLzl
Where is my continuation?
dropped ch5
art is kinda weird and plot is messy
@4 DROPPED
The art, story and characters are all a no for me. So its a drop.
2022-04-06 08:10
Tags: #eh
Uke too horny n desperate
2022-03-20 13:17
Tags: #Genre writing #Gay noir #Historical piece #Mafia x cop
Shanghai mafia x cop noir
2022-02-06 03:03
Tags: #Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ
2021-12-14 11:27
Tags: #not bad #gd story
not bad at all
let’s go lesbians let’s go
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Name:
Mato no Hoshikuzu |
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Status:
Ongoing
RSS
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Author:
Miyako
2019 released.
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Genre(s):
Yaoi
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Alternative:
Stardust of the Demon City |
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