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they should NOT have ended up together
Honestly, I love how they marinated the slow burn plot. It was painfully great. The timing and confession felt just right. Then, the story just ambushed us with that fast and furious chasing arc and ending in 1 chapter.
I wished they made the arc longer and painfully slow, it's so anti-climatic.
i hate when the angst peaks then it ends "happily" fuck u
Anjing. Baca dari ch 10 ke 30 kaya gada perkembangan ceritanya. Baru work pas ch 45. Cokk gile aje lu. Botinya guoblokk najis, bego tolol. Mana blushing mulu kerjaannya. Dibego2in junior nya oke oke aja. Gabisa ambil keputusan, ga tegas, klemar klemer dan bodoh pula akademiknya. Dah paket lengkap. Seme nya tipikal seme jahanam tukang maksa, pemerkosa, manipulatif.
Klimaks cuma ada di ending itupun ngecringee banget shaattt merinding sebadan2 gw. Cerita macam apa ini. Taik. Ga kreatif bener ini authornya nya bikin cerita. Udah mah jelek, bertele tele pula, mending kalo slow pace tapi setiap ch isi nya jelas lah ini mah kaga, ngeweee mulu. Karakternya gada yg waras. Kalo ga dongo ya kek anjing. Padahal udh diskip2 gw bacanya tapi pada akhirnya tetep ngerasa buang2 waktu aja. Ga ngerti development cerita kali ya ni author nya. Mana kaga ada redemption arc nya lagi wkwkw cape deh. Sekali minta maaf langsung dimaafin wkwkw kocak ga masuk akal. Mirip2 jinx juga ni cerita nya. Cerita tolol. Tapi paling ga masih ada harapan dikit si jaekyung pas ditinggal kim dan. Walau ga berharap banyak juga, paling sama aja kek bj alex. Ga memuaskan.
2024-01-27 21:16
Tags: #Beautiful Art #possessive seme #Hot seme #some good food
jinx but with piano playing , the smut is so good tho
We want extra ch pleaseee
Too much smut and kinda wattpad like cringy.
Dropped at 15
They keep on having sex and sex i didn't bother to read the dialogues cuz I knew what they are saying such a waste uke let himself use that way and seme didn't even suffered i expected that he should fail that last competition but it worked for him lol what a waste of time is this .
2023-10-25 10:08
Tags: #The uke are so easy tho hurmm
I can't believe how s***** this story is tho
Alot of SA but besides from that the story was really interesting
The story as a whole reminds me of Jinx by Mingwa, albeit with a slightly less intense vibe. While I did enjoy reading this story, I couldn't help but feel that the scenes depicting Mo Lahn's realization of his love for Lee Sandeul and their subsequent confession were rather brief, spanning only the last two chapters. As a reader, I yearned for a couple of extra chapters showcasing their journey as a couple, as the limited content failed to fully satisfy me. Considering the rollercoaster they went through, from being sleeping partners to fuck buddies, experiencing separation, and finally coming together, having just one and a half chapters dedicated to their love realization felt insufficient. Overall, I did appreciate the story, but it didn't captivate me enough, primarily due to the underwhelming ending.
2023-08-30 02:11
Tags: #smut #Yaoi #Full Color BL #One night stand #Cute #Farmer #Beautiful Art #supernatural
cute. but there's no denial that he's a rapist though
So you’re telling me instead of getting a shy blonde top and a slutty black haired uke from the cover, we get this? Horrible
2023-08-19 08:54
Tags: #Yaoi #Full Color BL #Possessive lover #One night stand #smut #Cute
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