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This is so disjointed and awkward.
So MC can know all these secrets, but if he tells it to the person they die. Weird premise with very few rules touched upon so far, but whatever, that's fine. Has potential, right?
Wrong. It instantly gets thrown into awkward plotpoints with weak connections between em. We get 0 connection to our MC. Before he can become someone likeable, or sympathetic, we have him thrust into the "drama." We get two people killed like right off the bat with his newfound "powers."
This was a bad decision on the authors part. It all happened so fast that we can't bond with MC. We don't get to see him have any compelling thoughts. All of his decisions are instant, with little thought and leaves the reader with no reason to root for MC. His "ex girlfriend" dies and his response is so flat. It was like the author believed if we saw 3 panels of him with a sad face, it'd convey everything we need. So the story moves on and MC gives the vibe he had no feelings or understanding of his "ex gf." Like, he seems like they were a momentary fling. So it doesn't feel like she deserved to die, and MC feels pretty emotionally stunted.
Then his friend dies, and again we get no real reaction. Was this dude MCs friend? It certainly doesn't feel like it. It seems like MC barely even has a connection to him. Like, dude was cheating with MCs "ex gf" so yeah, I get he's not supposed to be a good guy. But MC doesn't linger on his death, and just carried on. He then kills a random person who tried to sell him gum, just because dude was lying about his leg being hurt.
Like... Who are we supposed to be rooting for? Who are we supposed to be attached to? What is our MCs motivation?
It's all just meh. Not thought out.
All the thought was put into how "artistically scary" they could make the scenes. More attention is paid to facial expressions than what is being said.
That's the damn devil speaking to you
Chapter 2
Secret buddy more like death note.496739263. The first kill wasn't his fault the 2nd and 3rd were more so his fault
~☆♡°~ this look dark..looking forward to it
__>> A secret disclosing devil If you speak about it, the one who you tell the secret to will die
Ew the mc is hella cringe, tf u mean kill him? bro is extra stupid so how he gonna kill some random mf that has powers or whatever. Overall this shit seems dumb and tries hard to be some good psychological action or whatever stuff, but it fails to actually be good. That last part on chap three had me embarrassed on how stupid it was
2022-07-26 13:35
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The art is pretty decent and looks like we're in for an interesting story.
Ugly Bastard Slayer, my friend, I see you spitting straight facts once again. MC seems quite dim, but honestly, I think he actually does want to kill these people, he's literally revealing secrets left and right. It's giving me Wal-Mart Light Yagami vibes, but with some Mary Sue justice mixed in
