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2023-01-18 09:43
Tags: #Wtf #who #when #where #how
oneshot? wtf why tf..... bro what happened the plot was going good but its executed so horribly including teh trasnalation
This is sooo good, i need other chapters,
2022-07-03 14:21
Tags: #it was okay...
it's fine...kinda short and doesn't have that much explanations, but it's fine
2022-03-23 13:19
Tags: #Shounen Ai #Fluffy #One Shot #School #Assassin #Hitman
A super quick read about two cute school boys who decided to start dating. We later find out that one of the boys are from a family of assassins.
2022-03-20 05:51
Tags: #shounen ai #school life #killer #One Shot
Could be a lot more
Not interesting
-needs more development
-If it was made to be one shot and with psychologicals problems you can't just add that ending lol like it doesn't make sense first all the plot of the story was leading to a healthy relationship and than you add the part of a job? Which you clearly didn't explain which one which left us with details and at the end you just show a panel of a person the guy crying? And the other guy killing persons ? It was way out of context lol and you should have tried maybe put it at least some hints at the start and yeah that all.
Its like the plot thickens every second like i kinda thought that he had a secret relationship with the teacher and then it was his FATHER DUNDUNDUN, ( i also thought they were having a ,,,, relationship. I DUNNO THEY WERE SUSPICIOUS TT) then BAM he was a HAHAHAHHAHA murderer that was so random I CANT
How did it went from talking abt dick size to killing people HGAH
I honestly am okay with this
It was a great FLUFF story in the beginning but why did author suddenly dropped i kill ppl bcs that's just what my family do in the end...bad ending dude if author had continued to develop it, it would have been better.
2021-12-09 08:40
Tags: #Wtf #Yamete Girl
ngl the yamete girl cracked me up
I mean you can go somewhere with it HOWEVER this oneshot is straightforward (which is a good thing), but too rushed for my tastes. 5/10 If this has more story, it’d probably be 7-8/10. I don’t feel this should’ve been a oneshot seen as there’s no much you can do with it but yeah
Terribly drawn and the "plot" sounds like a parody.
2021-12-04 17:03
Tags: #O(≧∇≦)O
"u smell sweet karuro san lets have sex im so hard rn" lmao boi calm yo ballsack down. its a oneshot but it all feels like it happened in 4 pages only lol
ML approaches the MC about wanting to date and the MC asks him a slew of personal questions about his sick and what position he’d take if they had sex. There’s a really strange plot twist introduced at the the end though…