mistakes to learn from

vr game: alleged players vs virus, time travel bullshit; no character depth, clumsy pacing, no character development in sight,

Started strong, dragged an awkward middle, and finished as a mediocrity of spectacles

waste of concept; clear destination, clumsy direction; rocky character introductions and developments; unique MC turned cliché, main cast turned background character

c: low ranked yakuza turned angel-in-training

c: mermaid: hair turns to a different colour when wet with sea salt water

mediocre attempt of exploring one's sexual orientation, premature ending, top be lowkey having internalised homophobia, flat and rigid characters; could've been good

the execution of plot twists could've been better: the baits or crumbs were premature, some underwhelming, some were misprioritised.

1st story concept, potential supernatural psych story

waste of premise, stale storyline, stilted pacing, 1D characters + sub-zero character development

everything, everyone, anything, was so fkn busy