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Okay, well, this hurt a lot. They didn't go into details about the aftermath of getting exposed (likely horrible bullying and domestic abuse) but I can very well imagine. I'm glad they didn't go into details but at the same time, it puts a really sour taste in my mouth. Did they drop out? Did they graduate? In the end, was the sensei the only one on their side? Did MC get a job? Did ML switch jobs? Did the school ever fix that hazard of a bloody railing?!! What happened to that scum girl??
I don't really like the MC's personality nor do I like her 'I'm the creator' attitude, but it's okay. Don't like stories bout authors transmigrating into their own story but this passable. UP: Lol, not ML being RELIEVED that MC's heart skipped a beat for a girl. Shoujo really do be negating wlw's existence like it's their job. They're just besties~! If I said 'lesbian', they'd prob ask if it were a new drink and I'd say, it pairs well w/ the appetizer, 'pussy on a plate' and they'd run w/ it.
Awwwww, little bunny Zashikiiiiii!!!! So cute. My hearttt. Anyway, this a nice, down to earth bittersweet story. I like stories like this. They both fell way too fast, but it's really cute and the ML is hilarious.
I love this and hate this sm. Seriously, I really love this, wth. This is the worst. *sobs eternally* Idk what to make of the extras. Did she get reborn or was it like an alternate kinda story plot? W/e. Making me obsessed and then messing w/ my feels and then hurting my heart permanently. Screw y'all. UP: Okay, these extras making me feel bitter and my heart hurts. It's not bittersweet either, just plain bitter. This is no longer okay for me.
The reason ML started gyming was really sad and the reason he mainly stopped was also sad. Idt I can think about it differently. This was just really sad to read. The way ML reacts to molestation and people fantasising crap about him, it is really bloody sad. The MC is so creepy, so horrible, so cruel, so disgusting, and he's packaged as some kinda cute 'safe' guy cause he likes cute things. I'm not buying it. The way he treats the ML is seriously not okay. It's really telling of his true char.
Well, this is an awful read. You are his boss, but you're unnecessarily harsh, mean, cruel, publicly degrading and personal digs are not okay. You're an incompetent leader and I would've quit. You would never make a good lover either. MC is correct. Being harsh 'on purpose' doesn't make any sense and I feel no pity for you. You don't deserve MC at all. This honey plot is so forced.
Well, this continuously leaves a bad taste in my mouth, seeing as I hate ALL the char's as well, but I can say, it does hook you.
This was kinda stupid. It also has nothing to do w/ the title.
Well, I dislike MC. She has a giant gaping brain hole at the stupidest times and she's mean to ML for n/r. I also hate MC's bro, who's like a cowardly pushover and annoying like his sister. In fact, I hate almost everyone but little Peter who learned to read for himself and Eric who's super good at collecting info. They're both so nice. Everyone else gives me a headache in annoyance and frustration. The chaps are cut weirdly and the art isn't always the most appealing so that doesn't help.
Ahhhhhhh . . . this was so lovely, so sweet. *skips around throwing flower petals in people's faces*
Twilight (Nishimoto)