-dropped-

Just what the fuck. And not in an interesting or dark "what the fuck" kind of way either. More like why the fuck does literally anything in this story happen? A scratching of the head wtf

This never wasn't a *struggle* to read (ba dum tss). No, but really the mc's are super lame, and an entire story predicated on a misunderstanding is boring and lazy story-telling imo. Yawn fest and no smut. Tbh if there had been smut I think it somehow would've still somehow have been boring.

Dropped. Got bored. ajsdfnasudbfinj what is with all these fun premises that just suffocate under weird pacing and a lack of a compelling and clear narrative GIVE ME MORE MURDERY STORIES (but with plot that makes sensssse)

Got bored in the first chapter but pressed on. I was half convinced that the story was going to take tropes and do something interesting with them, but nope.

Gah. Man was this one frustrating. I think I got to chapter 46 before I realized that nothing was going to actually happen. I kept reading because it always felt like something was *about* to happen. Nope. The MC was boring af too-- he was immediately ~perfect~ and had almost zero character change or growth outside of a really tender moment at the start.