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I STAND BEHIND WHAT I SAID—WHY DID IT END??? The characters were so well written, and the story was just such a good time…. ahhh now I’m sad lol
No bcuz like it was WEIRD lmaoooo. But it was so cute…….and it was rlly unique!! I love that, since a lot of the stories on here can be so copy-and-paste type shit sometimes
READ AT UR OWN RISK I wish someone had given me that warning lmao…………this story was so incredibly written the ending was tragic, but in a way that was so beautifully done I can’t even complain. I swear, it’s been MONTHS (years?) since I’ve read this AND I STILL THINK ABOUT IT JSJDDNDKDNDOD. The only thing I didn’t rlly like is how the main two met (it was a little odd) and the whole pedophilia subplot (comparing pedophilia and homosexuality without any nuance is rlly damaging and gross)
The beginning was indeed rather bad but once the author found their footing, the story took way the hell off……like, I rlly liked it
I’m still fucking shattered over the ending……like, where’s the rest??
The first story L O V E the concept, and the execution was don’t bother reading the second story, tho
…….don’t ask
Like……the suspense in this story is unlike anything else on this platform seriously…..the way they lure you in with the funny, adorable atmosphere, and then hit you with the TWISTS chile….
KSKSKSKSKS bro I honestly fucking love these characters so much the story was so simple, but the characters had such realistic and respectful actions and reactions that it’s just KSKSKSKSKS IDK ADORABLE
LIKE it’s short, so you’d think it’s simple, but like, it’s got kids summoning DEMONS, cute priests that might be CAT MURDERERS, and maybe-somewhat-slightly bl subtext, if ur willing to stretch so not only is the world rlly well crafted and interesting, it’s also just about as enviable as they come lol *shrugs* what’s not to love
Reversible!