Hahahaha this is sooooo funny hmmm, I keep on wondering what makes me feel what pure love is, I think I'm losing it completely anyway, the story is real nice. Smooth flowing. Conflict is there. The characters are nice too even the way they handle their misunderstandings and the way they resolved it, it was nice. I the artstyle too.
Hahahaha this is cute. Goodness. It was super short and real good
Hmm, almost there ..the purity of love, then it turned to different direction but that's fine. The story is still good and how their love changes from embarrassing moment to sweet. I first read about asmzuma's story I didn't know he was like this, made me thought that he can fell attached to anyone who will stood for him sorry, azuma, but you kinda became a real deceiver in my eyes this story ends well tho felt like some parts are too shallow to be necessarily included but they are there
Ahahaha this is nice!!! Funny. Super I like it the character of uke, he's real naughty and cute. The story flows smoothy, and ends nicely. I like how the seme confronted his feelings too. Feels like this story didn't beat around the bush the artstyle is nice.
First, I was like 'really? Is this the same who created pink jam?!" Then I opened it and saw it, IT REALLY IS! The artstyle, the shadings, the details ...all was there. Wow. Amazing story as well, smooth flowing, and the conflicts were laid out and faced properly thoooo it was tag completed at chap.7 but feels like there should be more!!! There's still more or so I am hoping I like the story a lot, fun to read, not much drama and not too stressful. It has the same feels for me
Hah! It was actually nice. The story. I've been reading bl since I dunno, been sooo long but there are still instances that I'd feel uh, anxious? Awkward? about such sexy scenes especially if I dunno, the bottom is too into sexy thing after they just declared their love that very moment. I do like straight forward, honest ukes but hmm, this uke kinda getting off my radar of likes but he's too nice & open minded actually, like how their conflict faced well. Kinda expect much larger drama
I don't know if I have this listed already but, yeah. This story is quite nice. I'm kind of a little bummed due to the cover where their muscles were flex very well- big muscled men but really like the synopsis, and then voila! Was really nice! I like the artstyle too and the characters. I also like that he won't have intrcrse with the uke unless his feelings are well conveyed and received this kind of love with respect is
Well, holla! I didn't know it would be this nice. The story, the comcepts' both nice. The story was conveyed properly about the sensitivity the characters have (tho wasn't explain scientifically- it could be another informative matters) it was informative too. The flow of the events were a-okay. I like the artstyle, the expressions were well reflected on their feelings and wordings (coz there are some stories like that they can't show it to the expressions of characters) it was a fun story.
It's nice. Waaaah~ I like this story. It's not too heavy, just enough of drama that makes you full and satisfied at the end. Haaaa~ plot's nice, the characters too, especially the seme is so creepy at some part but he's got a real nice character, and also the artstyle. Plus, I like how the family thing mattered very much in here and was taking real consideration. This. The flow of events goes nicely.
Haha! Funny and cute. Well delivered of emotions and also the flow of the story. You won't get lost. Or so I say because it wasn't showed or stayed but shoyo seemed to confessd he likes haruma way too fast when in the story, they've only just met for a day or two The artstyle.
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