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felings well written, everyone have their reasons to act as they do, and the characters and misunderstanding are not dump, but believable
LOVE IT is for stories like this that I love BL, when would other genres do something with such messed up characters? a hot sex and a end like this? no one is "right" or "wrong" they are just people sometimes they do what benefits them, sometimes they chose to do altruistic things and sometimes they are just broken, and it would be fine if you didn't hurt anyone, but once you do it could just began a game of who hurts more each other and themselves, what is more real than "good" characters to me
10/10 good character writhing, the Author knows how to write trauma, and Guys finally a threesome, like in most cases there is a fight over two or more lovers I get this feelings "why they don't try to be all together? why this is not even brought up?" and I know "prejudice, principles etc" but why not try? like there is not just hetero monogamy out there
and finally but more importantly the sex is just breath taking, had mental orgasms reading it, it is not some fairy tale "making love"
A Lucky Coin