beta
This was really great but it ended too soon. It really needed an epilogue to show after they took each other’s hands again mainly to see them graduate then after graduation. He declared he’s changed his mind and would stick around after graduation and for longer as long as they could be together. But I would have liked to see it. To feel less uneasy about their future.
The translation wasn’t great and it made the story abit difficult to understand - plus the writing was small. I liked the story despite this - it was super cute.
Sotsugyousei