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The only thing I don't like is how vulnerable, or more so weak to say it bluntly, Satoshi (uke) is. Besides that I like the book. And Satoshi is pretty so I guess I can ignore it.
The first couple were super cute! Absolutely adored them. The second couple however, I didn't like the seme, Yuuma. He was too annoying for me to really like their story unfortunately.
I just didn't like the main characters. I lost interest at like chapter 7. And while I 100% understand why, I still think the MC is annoying (The ML too ngl. But more so in a "gives me the ick" way.)
I don't like the seme and there's no redemption arc that can change that for me.
Not a fan of the whole "Naive virgin that's such a virgin that he blushes at everything and doesn't know when someone is clearly referencing to sex" thing. I've always found it too unrealistic bc there's no way this grown ass man doesn't know basic info about the bedroom tango. Especially as a high school teacher. I got bored in the first chapter bc I could guess where the story was going.
Don't mind this. Pretend it's not here. It's for my friend when he needs refs for art reasons. (He hates the censors lolol)
Idk where to start. But uh, first things first, I hated it :D And I want my time back :'). Secondly, and without context: pervert insane uke(in a bad way), and consent is practically a distant cousin *sigh* 1/5, but the art was good.
Toshishita Kareshi no Renai Kanriheki