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bruh the seme is too smooth its weird i wish he matched the ukes energy a bit or atleast wish there was meaningful conflict it was annoying ngl
Alr idk what to make of this like. It doesnt piss me off so idk if i should put it in trash or mid but i guess the problems i have with it are enough to make it trash. Basically all of the characters have ZERO personality like holy shit they might as well be mannequins. Nothing to get invested in nd the pace is so fucking weird. I decided to pick back up and completed it. I wont keep it exclusively in trash anymore but its still really bad. Also the proportions are so weird. w.e
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Its ok if its a one shot but this pace is ridiculous lolol atleast add about 20 - 30 more panels
I dont like student teacher but a nurse is a grey area i guess plus uke is a bit childish so it works
Setting aside the creepy age gap its not too bad
this and the prequel (after morning love) both have opposite problems imo. this was too cold and bittersweet but the prequel couple became too mushy and corny. author needs to find balance
LMAO someone said youve seen hunter x hunter now get ready for butler x butler
idk why i was expecting something interesting as his backstory but obviously it was just bullying usual cliche. not saying its not important to discuss but come on can we get something with a little nuance please. i like the way the seme dealt with things. we need the relationship to be a little more fleshed out though, couldve used another chap or 2. oneshot last couple was weird lol idk what to think abt them. u can probs just skip ig
I see everyones point about the conflicting feelings towards aoi and the main couple. The biggest problem is that the main couple has no chemistry and no compelling character traits
Senpai, Danjite Koidewa!