beta
8/10
It's such an interesting plot but I wish it explored more. You can explore the other guy's POV when the timekeeper died in his timeline. PLUS, the mother mentioned that they don't know when time travel stops so you could've shown that. You could've shown how it will be different from the other timeline; Would they still be together? Will the guy still get married? Like there's so much more to unfold. It was still a really good story and told the story it wanted to so..
7/10
That was so fucked up.
No Review Yet/10
I'll get back to this when I find motivation to do so
9/10
I completely expected something else wtf she's the fucked up one
7/10
Felt too quick? There was a lot of twist and turns and I feel like there was unresolved plot points? It's not bad, I actually enjoyed that.
7/10
Honestly, kind of boring T.T the plot is really interesting though. It seems to be taking a deep path.
Kill the Lights