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The setting is really good for a smut.
Love the scenes so much, its slow, sensual and emotion packed
Definitely the one part where it was put in.
And in the latter chapters, where the bottom got so overwhelmed. I cant spoil anything!
Its been many years i still love the first chapter.
The vividness of its sensuality still comes back to me sometimes. Its very delish. This flavor.
The 2nd chapter is odd ._.
This has the setting of a good smut, the art. The anatomy looks great, the plot feels heavy and unrushed. Im waiting for the time itd have a smut ^^
Update: for some reason i cant remember the plot of this one so id have to reread it again. Rip goldfish brain
Really love the part where he got angry. I think it was ch 50 up
Setting makes its so it can be a good smut
The setting makes it so that it could be a good smut
CAN I JUST SAY THE TOP IS SO HOT???
THE TOP IS SO HOT!!!
the bottom is an eye candy too!!!
Memorable part for me..is when he convinced the top to do him in the first chapters. that was very brave of him
Art is rly great. Quite short, everyone is wholesome (for me). Very straight forward plot. -w- cute
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