abandoned

story/plot lost it's engaging aspects

Had a hard time reading it so I abadonned it, cuz I feel like there was so much potential with the characters and story. However this got lost real quick as the author doesn't rlly build the aspects that make the story interesting and engaging.
Since majority of the so called story is the sex part, it would've been interesting if the author developed more on their personality and conflicts. As their personality feel 2 dimensional.
One things for sure, art is rlly good