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The spice could be so much more even without them having sex.
Doesn’t have to be spicier, but the two of them deserve an intimate sex scene, or two, or three, or five.
It just feels like something is missing. Jiskar does go down on Ray a lot, without any hesitation, so bonus raunch points there.
If it was spicier, it might actually be an okay story.
Give me proper sex scenes!
I’m guessing the novel has the raunch I craved when starting this based on the R19 tag on the cover.
I Thought It Was Time!