@10
Lol, all I remember is that every time I see this cover pic, I give this a wide berth. I have no idea what this did to make me quite so repulsed? Like, in 10 chaps, I'm so disgusted that the cover pic still giving me the ick from the notifs. Insane talent. If after all these years, I still feel disgusted, ain't no way I rereading, neither to give it a 2nd chance nor to roast it in fine detail.
@73
I'm glad MC's starting to feel like she has a home, fam+love, but that's just Vera+Grandpa. From D1, Charente treated her as an outsider and I can see he still does, though he's being kind out of guilt. He used MC to make himself look good in front of his ex w/o thinking once about how MC would feel. Be like "crack open her head". How bout grow some human decency instead. MC will always be an outsider in his fam of 3. He'll never truly care about her. MC's satisfied w/ too little. It's sad.
@16
It's been ages since I last read this, so Idk what it's about. I think I may have been bored reading it, but what I DO know, is that I'm never returning to it. DNF.
@30[Asura]
That OOC mission mess-up by MC made no sense and was inexcusable. Idk what the author was thinking, if it needed tension, loss, weakness and trauma as a reason to insert char dev or what, but it was poorly done and I remember being enraged. I haven't touched this in years and prob never will again. DNF. Bye, cutie Kuro (which is lazy, borderline offensive naming, author).
@77.5
All I remember was MC getting hella cringy and annoying this particular chap, that I ran out of sheer 2nd hand embarrassment. The story was also, imo, getting hella boring. Idt I'll ever really reach for this again. DNF.
@40
The way I would rage-quit under such terrible leadership and sexual exploitation. Boy, bye.
@51
Everyone's all, 'MC's so mature!' but I'll say it again: just cause the author says it or makes other char's say it, doesn't make it so. MC is childish, idiotic, braindead and good for nothing. How is she not dead yet from her sheer stupidity? Also, she must be a raging alcoholic. Beer is mentioned every other chap. She keeps making the same childish impulsive mistakes and author thinks that's comedy. Let's not even mention that the plot is non-existent and nothing is happening at all. DNF.
@52
From what I remember, this was super vile and angsty. The village people were heinous just cause, there was potential pedophilia w/ MC but MC seemed genuinely hooked on his own predator and I dislike the CP cause I remember one separated from his fam as a teen to stay w/ village boy and village boy was wishy-washy, ungrateful, entitled w/o understanding how huge that choice was. The bully in this is also evil and there was foreshadowing of a CP for him, so I'll never pick this up again. DNF.
@124[Asura]
MC is increasingly more annoying and pathetic in my eyes. He literally killing this story for me so I'm out. I also hate the Saintess, who has weak mentality, no personality and is the extremely weak, need-to-be-saved, damsel in distress type. Ew. The romance is whack and the action scenes were just giving me the impression they were weak ants and I want them to lose. Go, Lich! Plus, MC's 'OP plans' killed thousands of people. I ain't forget that. Bye.
@03[Asura]
Being real, I can't remember what this is about but Ik I likely won't get back to it, and it's likely just the art. My bad. I'm sorry. I think the plot was more unique than the majority of other works on Asura at the very least.
Cupid in the Rainbow Trap