@32[Asura]
Ew, lol. The girls are either stupid, incompetent, rude or disgusting. Love it when authors hate girls but love gigantic unrealistic busts. Slavery, how fun. Boy, just take the L. Your 2nd life looking worse than the 1st. Bye.
@17[Asura]
"Even if I'm a 7th class mage, I'm still your son." 'Ell. That's right. Even if he's 7th class, he's still my son.' No, no. That's def not your son. He suddenly became an ogre after becoming 7th class. What did you THINK he was, Ma'am? A genetic mutation? This dialogue. Cringe. It's really very bad. My poor IQ. My poor blood pressure. How do you get more stupid and ridiculous than this? Does MC have a surname? What is the pt. of this? Storytelling and pacing are also rubbish.
@03[Asura]
To that one person who said Asura never translates trash, lol.
@20[Asura]
MC's beyond useless, esp when it actually matters. He's willfully stupid and arrogant, not just ignorant. Also, the implication that MC murdered his niece and/or others, had me checking outttt. Hahaha, nope. I heard he made these char's to mimic the people he loved. His char is a blood knight that has lapses in judgement, anger issues and murderous tendencies, which could reflect real life, the way the other char's mimic his other loved ones irl (who he may/may not have killed?). Wth.
@47
DERANGED. Idk if anyone else is seeing how looney toons this MC is, but I sure am, and her looney toons mentality is making all other char's act looney toons too, and it's not even psychological genre, which leads me to believe that the author thinks that this story is sane, which means the author is just as looney toons. I'm out.
@48.5
ABSURD. THE AUTHOR REPULSES ME. You went through HELL for YEARS, cheating, debasement, public humiliation, emotional/verbal/physical abuse, EVERY time you had sex was RAPE (you're crying/feeling empty/hated it), you made a toxic work environ for your coworkers who were around your abusive fights but all's FORGIVEN and you end up together w/ him just cause he kept a small promise after breaking ALL his other ones? The ONLY reason I hated this story from the onset was CP2; DNF for CP2 too.
@54[Asura]
It feels very up in the air and directionless. I'm quite thoroughly bored w/ the plot for a while now and I'm so confused as to what the author is planning. He's a doctor, a saint, a swordsman, a magician, a teacher, a hero. This is all over the place, sm is happening and it's not a good thing. There's nothing tethering me here honestly, so I'm out.
@17
I was contemplating dropping this from the 1st story, since it was cringe, embarrassing and it left a bad taste in my mouth. Idk why I decide not to listen to my instincts. Each story got progressively worse than the last, and if you are triggered by SA, blood, painful rape, torturous pregnancies and the like, stop at story 1. I just want to be vomiting and crying rn. The storytelling is strange, the plot is sick and Idk and Idc what the author trying to do. I'm ending my pain here. DNF.
@12
People seeing healthy communication and conflict resolution for this CP must be really having a nice dream. I won't wake them up but Imma tip toe the hell outta here. PSA for those waking up, gaslighting, projection, interrogation, deception, verbal violence and sex (SEX IS THEIR ONLY FORM OF CONFLICT RESOLUTION) certainly doesn't constitute communication, conflict resolution OR assurance for your partner's anxiety, despair and insecurity. In case y'all wondering. Hard DNF.
@80[Asura]
Really boring me. A bunch of people Idk and can't be bothered to remember have been introduced, he has a crap ton of powers, majority of which he won't use, and I thought a big thing for him was missing his fam and his mother's cooking but he still treats them like crap and is barely ever home, which is the exact same as his past life? I'm just really bored w/ it for a while now.
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