What struck me the most was the contrast of Ashitaka with so many other ukes I've read. I like him. He's sassy and sexy and knows how to make good retorts. On the other side, Non's just some lovestruck guy wanting his crush to love him back, he's so adorable! but... super sexy, too... :3
All in all, nice story. I would've like more relationship development (like, in other situations, not that this lacks plot or is too rushed, I just wanted more T-T)
OK warning THIS IS CUTE AF
I must admit I didn't like Saki in the beginning. Not bc he's older than Jun, I just don't like how he looks. too... sharp-featured? (tbhIkeptthinkingofhimassomehotcollegeprofessor). Jun, on the other side... HE'S A FUCKING PIECE OF HEAVEN god bless Jun (there is something really wrong with that last statement but meh) Jun is now one of my fav characters in yaoi. So kawaii desu ne :3 the other stories are just for fan plotting material tbh
Puchitto Hajiketa