This is literally so bad I had to make a whole new list starting with this as number one.
The concept started out so good. It went downhill when sex became the main focus instead of the plot. It went even further when the plot began to get rushed, there’s so many fucking plotholes, each character is just poorly made, communication? Who is she. Where is his FUCKING SCAR he was literally slashed by a sword. I just…I’m astonished that I read the whole thing. I really had hopes it would get better.
This is going to come off as surprising to a lot of people…and it’s surprusung to me too. I got to chapter 43, the communication is nonexistent. That’s normal. I can handle that. But he said “I can try to reason with him”. With THE STALKER. OF THE PERSON HE IS INTERESTED IN??? And then they just CONTINUE to not talk about ANYTHING with each other???? I don't fucking understand. You don’t REASON with a FUCKING STALKER I’m just pissed. That literally ruined the whole thing for me.
I really was into this whole concept but the fact he literally made the whole rape just NONEXISTENT in his brain baffles me. Couldn’t finish it because wtf is that reaction. He’s just mentally fucking ill he’s not helpless he’s literally choosing to be miserable and I cannot relate or even feel bad for him. Nothing about this story even makes sense to me anymore I really thought I’d like it based on the premise but it’s just bad.
I really tried getting into this one but I literally hate it so much lol. The MC is fucking stupid. Like not because he has no memories. But he’s just DUMB. And I cannot connect with his character AT ALL. And the ML is just a toxic piece of lying trash not a single thing out of his mouth so far has been truthful. Will not finish.
I genuinely hate this story so much. I thought I’d like it because the uke is pathetic but it’s TOO MUCH. His BF actually tried having him raped by other people and instead of realizing that’s abuse he said he wanted to forget it happened???? And he’s SAD the bastard wants to break up??????
I actually can’t read it. It doesn’t make sense even on a Stockholm syndrome level. That’s how ridiculous and frankly annoying it is. Will not finish (made it to ch20)
I really was so in love with this in the beginning. Ch34 now and I just…nothing that they’re doing is making sense. There’s not an ounce of communication which leads to rape, and overall the story has turned to absolute garbage. I no longer can read it even though I had such high hopes for it even WITHOUT any of the smut posted her (R15 version). Honestly just disappointed because I really did like the story in the beginning.
Miscommunication. The “mistook reality as a dream” trope that I FUCKING hate, but like???? MULTIPLE TIMES?????? No personality. No redeeming qualities. Will not finish.
NOT A HAPPY ENDING
It might be the translations but genuinely wtf is he talking about.
“A high school kid skipped school and my father ran a red light and hit the highschool student and my father died so now I hate the highschool student because he skipped school” WHAT DOES THAT MEAN. Anyway, this is actually just terrible, bad translations or not he really has no reason to feel like this because honestly wtf is that logic.
I really wanted to like this but the characters do not retain their personality chapter to chapter. Its poorly translated, the story has NO flow. Somehow the characters don’t seem like the same character as I continue to read this. How did their relationship progress so damn quick. Why is the antagonist there but also not there. Idk. It’s just so poorly written I cannot continue no matter how much I initially liked it.
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