beta
NO PEN
1000/10 hehehe
First half was absolutely amazing. Second half, the story was too focused on the second male lead. i understand that it was all part of the plot, however was it really necessary to make the male lead a spluttering mess? It hurts to watch him so emotional and out of character. Regardless, it was still a fun read!
Incest
Uke is fussy
Hatsujou Suru Unmei ~Eriito Alpha No Risei Ga Genkai~