the characters didn't make sense, their motivations&actions didn't make sense and it was like the author tired to explain their behavior but the reasons were even less sensical. like if someone you just met asks you to masturbate in front of them, no matter how crazy you are there's no way you would do it. and then they just spontaneously fuck right there like wth. they didnt even really end up together at they end, and even though mc has confessed, theres literally no reason to like each other.
only 3 chapters long. short, cute, quick and not much happens. i was slighly disspointed bc i saw a well built megane salary man and i though he was just my type but he turned out to be more like a puppy lol
some parts of it were like actually really cool and the characters actaully had a lot of depth but then they threw it away with the weird younger brother that litterally gets hus older brother to jerk him off. its even weirder that the older brother agrees like their whole relationship is so werid. at times it seems childish and shallow but then some parts are like really unique and are deep so its confusing lol
its supposed to be like part of his character that he teases the puppy seme but thats just not my thing sorry. it also kinda felt one sided so yeah not my thing (and to add insult to injury i think it was broing as well lmfao)
Ts pmo
Goodbye Harlequin