Good yaoi

Honestly the second couple was soo cute, definitely “best yaoi” tier, but it was very short. Main couple was slightly problematic but somehow it didn’t ick me out, so now I’m confused. Well, not problematic but just eyebrow raising honestly, also I don’t really know how they fell in love, it was a bit sudden

Was a bit messy and didn’t really understand what was going I sometimes lmao

The sex was stiff and robotic and honestly kind of unnecessary. Like sex right after a confession?? Really? It kind of came out of nowhere. I still did like the story but since I live in a forgiving country like Australia I couldn’t seem to full understand the idea that it’s better to brutally turn someone down than be with them just bc you’re a gay couple, which was a main part of the story. So that messed it up a bit for me

It was cute but a few scenes were kids unrealistic and I feel like the pacing was a bit weird and messy. The bullying was portrayed beautifully and the characters emotions and everything so beautiful. But ml was a bit dense, and behaved pretty unrealistically. Mc was a cutie tho and when he stood up the the bullies it was vey well written and realistic

They don’t end up together in the end necessarily (at least not explicitly) but somehow I still really enjoyed it. I love how we got to see how they liked each other without just having them say it (eg: seki listening to his requests and doing what black haired guy says, even if it’s bothersome.) I think maybe it’s better than “good” but not good enough for “great”. Pretty unique and interesting and consensual I think

seme kept swinging from “omg he’s such a bad person” to “oh nvm he’s actually nice” to “NOPE HE IS DEFINITELY A HORRIBLE PERSON”. liked it because it went into depth and the misunderstandings were long and deep rooted - in a realistic and understandable way. Their actions were in line with their misconceptions. Seme behaved concerning at end,he takes it back but still it’s a bit weird, gets brushed over bc uke is fine w/ it. Final chap boring

hmm...well i didnt really care much for the uke, fuwa san, bc it felt like i couldnt really connect with all the characters. it was sooooo cuuuttteee when they were snuggling on the veranda and i liked the arc with the mug. that was pretty unique and interesting. i surpsrisingly didnt hate the half confession with "i should have locked you up and made you mine" bc he apologised properly. could be "best" idk

It was cute and the sex was super duper explosive but bc there wasn’t any big plot points and it was like slice of life it was sooo dodamn boring. It was still a unique and refreshing take on Omegaverse though

i seriously didnt get the start. the characters only stared to make sense towards the end. at the beginning it was confusing and the way they interacted and what they thought of each other was ambiguous. i didnt reaally get how they fell in love. i absolutely adored their backstories though, and how they were told.