beta
dropped ch 14
the writing and pacing is all a bit jank. and I mean, if you're suddenly having visions and can understand the moon language.. maybe you are not as unrelated as you thought??? no one wants to think about this however. I also don't really like how noisy the top is. too loud and pushy for my tastes
idk maybe it's because I started reading this bc I wanted an enemies to lovers plot, but I'm actually not into the seme first meeting the uke when he's at his most vulnerable. and then it feels a little bit too much like love at first sight. not my style
dropped ch 2
really just not in the mood. maybe I'd try it again later
started reading bc with a title like maki wants to have sex i really thought the uke would be assertive. but he's a pushover and he cries all the time. also, I can see it coming from miles away that he's getting sexually assaulted AGAIN by the SAME PEOPLE
dropped ch.3
dropped ch2
not blatantly awful just a little too basic...
dropped ch 10
not my preferred type of tsundere. also, the incubus going out to sleep around just to have the seme save him is annoyingly blatant. I don't really like it when the uke is constantly getting pushed around by the seme and when he finally decides to do what he wants, the seme undermines him somehow
dropped ch 5
it's not bad it's just a bummer even if the rape isn't super visual it's still depressing as hell. I feel so bad for these boys...
dropped ch 3
overly stoic seme with blushy nervous uke just isn't really my type
the art is super cute and the time loop aspect is interesting but I'm not really into tops who make nervous, embarrassed bottoms beg for it
dropped ch 4
mmmmmmmm don't care
Lunar Rabbit Prince