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The plot is wholesome but I would have liked more visual love between them.
The plot is very rushed and I think that everything happens in two days.
If they want to be together why do they call it "we're having fun"? Also, uke's ex-boyfriend is just trasssssh.
Seme has always had one-sided love for the uke, which actually is a little trashy. He has his issues, but please: go to therapy and treat him niceee.
This is really nice, seme's a big-big green flag, but at some point it has a love triangle (which I don't like) and the bad guy is not actually a bad guy.
I loved reading it but I had such a bad time doing it. The plot is nice, is good, well carried, but I come here to read happy and nice stories where two people fall in love and they end up together despite everything. I don't come here to find a REAL story that could have happen to anyone which is full of suffering, tears and angst. Thank God it has a happy ending though, because I cried throughout the whole story, I felt really sad and I had a really harsh time reading this manwha.
The plot is actually an easy lovestory of a love at first sight event, however it has the ingredients that made me think it was a little more intriguing. Chemistry between seme and uke barely exists. I see more chemistry between seme and his ex, and it pains to say it because the uke is a really sweet boy who deserves the world.
The story is full based in misunderstandings and miscommunication. Even when they get together you see tiny details (uke doesn't like to sleep on the arm of his boyfriend cause it's not that confy, but he won't say because he could get mad ¿?) that could be solved if they communicate.
It's an easy story of an unrequited love, but would have been nice if they don't go making asumptions!
Really boring…
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