you are not that bitch

real shitty of ml to just reject mc and then attempt to retry their relationship (even if he liked him all along, it was still a really weak plot point). didnt feel compelled by any of the characters, but they resolved their issue so oh well.

plot is interesting and reminiscent of titan's bride, but the actual pacing and storytelling aspect was ass, especially at the end (wtf even happened?). nice art but a shame the story was so poorly done.

conflicted because i think this was supposed to be a pwp, but it kinda has too much attempt at plot for me to regard it as such? mc was a douchebag throughout and i felt bad for how desperate ml was, i feel like the author added all the main plot beats without trying to build up to any of them properly. wish we got to see more of that blonde guy tho.

it really ramped up the creep factor in the last few chapters, and while i feel like stuff went on i feel like this rang a bit hollow in the narrative aspect.

i kind of understood it, i kind of didnt... underdeveloped in a way expected of a one shot but all the blushing was cute w nice art.

nice art and shading but not much other than that!

i feel like this started off really strong but really lost its steam and floundered halfway through.. its fine for mindless fluff but the plot does not go as well as id hoped

feel like its a bit too short and cliche to have much feeling for

chikage actually got on my nerves, omg--- if that man says he does not want a relationship with you, respect that!! jesus, bro pissedme off so bad and the fact that things somehow settled at the end was crazy to me

not very good and left a bad taste in my mouth, but the kid was cute at least!