beta
9/10
Story was great, just hoping for more background stories of the other characters why they undergone a certain trauma or they are born that way, personality wise.
The character development is quite jumped but it was there. I just hope more screen time on there own mental state like explore it deeper.
Still it was a great written story. No problem with threesome this is for you, if your uncomfortable with that skip.
9/10
Cute short story, beautiful drawing.
8/10
Good story, there is just a lot of cringe moment for me.
Also I do hope for a side story for the side couple.
Profundis